I am writing a book and I planned on writing the last chapter before I post the first and I want to know if this is good. I want brutal honesty.

I STEP BACK AS I LOOK AT THE KNIFE IN JAXON’S STOMACH “I’ve made a mistake,” I breath as I see Jaxon clutch the knife looking at me with hurt eyes, as the blood drips down slowly onto the floor. “Jaxon..” I cry as I see him collapse onto the floor. I rush towards him cradling his head as if he were a child. “Nova,” He says weakly “Yes?” I tremble “I loved you-“ he pauses to cover his mouth as he coughs and I see the crimson red once he takes away his hand and it makes my heart break a tiny bit inside. “I just want to know why-y you did this to m-me.” He says struggling to get the words out. “I’m sorry! I didn’t mean to do it, I was just made this way.” I sobbed. “It’s not something my Nova would do,” He says weakly as he goes silent and I feel the sticky, blood on my legs.

I lift his head and set him gently on the cold floor as the tears fall freely at the point.I stand slowly overcome with sadness, I slowly walk away. After a couple steps I let out a blood curdling scream and I cry. I knew that I had to kill him. The only thing I didn’t know was how much I would regret it.