First erotica (long story)

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(Background story)

The summer was blazin that August day.magnolia was a beautiful girl with long obern hair and sky blue eyes and a sweet southern accent , magnolia drove down the dirt road to her best friend Dixie’s house to pick her up . They were going to the rodeo ! Dixie jumped into magnolias truck an said “ya ready ?” “Hell yea “ replied magnolia then they were off when they pulled up to the front gates they were in the middle of singing that’s the night that the lights went out in Georgia then Dixie stopped and grabbed magnolia and pointed to this handsome bull rider and they both stared and Dixie looked at magnolia and said “you should should ride that! Maybe that’ll help you get over chris!” Magnolia just laughed and said “ya know what they say save a horse ride a cowboy “ but later on that day after all the excitement of the calf roping barrel racing and magnolias favorite bull riding she ran into the handsome cowboy again and since Dixie was chatting up a calf roper magnolia struck up a conversation with her own cowboy “heh I saw you out there you did amazing!” “Thanks , he was a tough bull” the cowboy was tall 6 foot with a strong muscular build from years of farm work he had sun kissed skin that let off a beautiful glow and brown eyes you could get lost in and his deep Southern voice made her heart skip a beat “I’m sorry I didn’t catch your name ?” “Magnolia” she said with a smile “Raymond,do you think I could have your number?”he said with a grin she blushed as she gave him her number

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(Actual sex part)

Later that night magnolias phone ran an it was him , her cowboy, they talked for two hours before she asked him to come over an her heart was racing , she went up to her room to get ready she put on a beautiful red lace bra and panties (just in case😘) an her favorite jeans an her best shirt (a nice red plaid shirt) an dabbed her favorite perfume on . He’s here she rushed to the door to greet him in they get to talking for a while on the couch and then look into each other’s eyes they both stop an Raymond leans in for a kiss , they soft lips meet an lock in a passionate kiss he then leans so magnolias laying down on the couch an he gets on top of her never breaking they’re kiss , magnolia reaches her hand down to feel he has a huge boner and she’s glad she put on her best lingerie she breaks the kiss an wispers in his ear let’s take this to my room she leads him into the room and he grabs her and pushes her onto the bed and kisses her neck making magnolia let out a soft moan they start undressing each other she’s in awe at what she sees he’s so beautiful he has a six pack and then she looks down a little more an her jaw drops at the sight of his 9 inch cock which is ready for her . He smiles an asks “like what you see ?” She blushes an nods her head he then gets on his knees and kisses her inner thigh she moans at his touch then he digs in to her wet pussy kisses an sucking on her clit and licking up all of her wetness she moans from all the pleasure he’s giving her then she grabs his hair to push his head into her then all her pleasure escapes in a huge rush he looks up at her and licks his lips saying “you taste amazing “ her legs are weak from her climax but she pulls him into the bed an he gets on top of her he slowly puts the tip in an asks “are you ok ?” And when she replies yes he slides in just the tip an watches her gasp slightly he then slides his whole length into her an she moans he’s slowly sliding in an out of her then he picks up speed eventually ram his length into her with each struck his balls hitting her clit her moans just making him go faster magnolia explodes all over him again then he says “I’m gonna cum “and pulls out magnolia sucks the tip as he explodes in her mouth they both collapse into the bed an cuddle til morning

How’d I do ? Any tips ? Sorry it’s so country I’m alittle redneck