Does this make sense?

I have lost 50+ and have 22 lbs left to loose. I told myself that once i get to my goal i want a tattoo as my reward. Well now im super close and im so excited to get to my goal. I was at a very low point in my life and I have walked through hell and back these last few years to get my life in order. I felt like a Phoenix was perfect to represent my "rebirth" but im not sure about the quote. I couldnt find a quote i liked so i thought id make one up. Does the quote make sense? Does it go good with the image?

P.S this is a rough draft of how i want my tattoo to be. The final thing will be much better 😂. THANKS IN ADVANCE! 💞