My first time writing erotica... and a true story from the other day! Please let me know what you think! Should I write more?

My husband is in the bathroom brushing his teeth so I know I only have a couple minutes. I turn out the main light in our bedroom and turn on the lamp for some dim lighting, then slip into the white mesh lingerie I wore on our honeymoon, and a pair of lacy white panties, before getting under the covers.

He walks into the bedroom and when he closes the door I pull the covers down so he can see me. My nipples are hard and visible through the sheer lingerie. His eyes instantly widen and he practically pounces on the bed towards me. I tug on his shirt and pull it over his head. His hands are running all over my body, aggressively pulling the lingerie out of the way to reveal my breasts, and stroking them with his left hand as his right wanders down my stomach and into my panties.

His fingers are on my clit now and he gently strokes a few times before entering me with his finger. I moan in ecstasy. He stops and pulls my panties off and throws them across the room, then rests his body on top of mine. I use my toes to pull his pants down and he kicks them off. I can feel his breath on my neck as he leans closer. His chests presses against mine and his dick grinds against my clit a few times before I feel the tip press into my vagina. “Already?” I ask, startled, as usually he’s one for lengthy foreplay. “I need to be inside you, I can’t wait this time,” he says.

I can feel myself getting wetter and wetter as he moans softly in my ear and slides his dick in and out of me shallowly. Pretty soon I’m ready to take every inch of him. I wrap my legs around him, grab his lower back with my hands, and pull him deep inside me. We both gasp in ecstasy and he continues to slide in and out of me, harder and deeper with each thrust.

After a few minutes he pulls away, grabs onto my shoulders and flips me on my left side. I can feel his dick against my inner thigh as he runs his hands up my stomach under my lingerie, and pulls it off over my head. He squeezes my breast with his left hand as he uses his right to lift my right leg up over his, and then slips his dick inside me from behind. He thrusts in and out of me a few times and then his hand wanders forward to my clit.

With one hand stroking my nipple, the other, rubbing my clit, and his dick gently sliding in and out of me, I feel my whole body starting to fill with pleasure. “I’m close” I whisper. “Good” I can tell he’s smirking even though I cant see his face “cum for me, baby. Let me feel your pussy tighten as you cum on my dick.” In a matter of moments I feel the rush of orgasm and I cry out, grabbing his hand to stop him from continuing to rub me.

He flips me over onto my back and slips his dick inside me again. He leans close and kisses my neck, sending chills down my spine. He pumps his dick in and out of me and a few minutes in, I feel his dick suddenly seize up and he moans “I’m about to cum.” I release a deep sigh and start kissing his ear “put a baby in me” I moan, and with that, I feel his dick start to pulse inside me and he lets out a sigh of relief as he cums.

... [thoughts, y’all? How’d I do? Do I write more?]