I have made smut! How did I do?

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My bf and I have a long distance relationship until I go back to school closer to him in the fall. I am in college. One thing we do is sexting. Today he asked me to make smut about one of my fantasies I have. I did it and sent him this.

You have a very stressful day you take it out on me. You come home and very stressed and need some type of release. So grab me and take me upstairs to your room. Before a word out you push me on the bed and start ripping my clothes off. After my clothes are off you kiss me a pull my naked against your body. As your kissing me your fingers trail down to my pussy and you start teasing me knowing you can control me. Before I could beg for more you push me down onto the floor. You unclothe yourself and tell me to suck. Of course I comply. Why wouldn't I? I love it when your in control. So I start sucking. But knowing what you need and knowing what I want I start teasing you. Going very slow. So you grab me by the hair forcefully and pull. You tell me to suck like the whore I am. I do what you tell me do. Afterwards you pull me up from the floor and push me back the bed. You pull and grab at me towards yourself. I try to "fight" back and tell you to "slow down" but you weren't having it. You flip me over and push me down before entering into me. I try to cover up my moans but you grab my arms and put them behind me. You command me to never disobey you and you slap my ass not caring if you left a mark or not. Your viscous pounding makes me scream louder and louder. You grab at my ass letting go of my arms, you position yourself to go deeper. However, letting go of my arms was a mistake. Even though I am enjoying bit of you fighting back makes it even more exciting. You grab me by the hair and growl in my ear. You take your huge cock out of my tight pussy and position me over your lap. And with every word came a slap on my ass. You kept hitting harder and harder until I moaned out the words "yes master."

You put on the bed. My back laying on the bed and my legs in the air. You tease me with your cock against my wet pussy. You love being in control. The Alpha over his Alphess. Getting her ready to breed their cubs. You enter slowly watching my face me in satisfaction. You bend my legs closer to my chest as you go deeper into me.

How did I do?