A short story what do u think

Beautiful
I got got home and was about to go up and do my homework when my mom called my name. J.C. come here for a sec. can i use the bathroom first? sure but hurry. i grabbed my back pack and went into the bathroom and sprayed myself down with body spray and washed my mouth out with mouthwash. i stepped into my bed room and threw my back pack on my bed then ran downstairs and walked into the kitchen. Yeah mom? hi honey your principle called today and said that you have an ambassador meeting and you didn't attend, and i was just wondering if you didn't attend then where did you go? i totally forgot about my meeting and i went to the park with ally. oh did you guys have fun? Yeah two nerds from our school taught us how to play football. cool OK honey do your homework. OK mom! i rain up stars and closed the door behind me. i turned on my radio and layed down on my bed. (dreams) i had a dream about Shawn we snuck out in the middle of the night and made out for 3 hours behind price chopper. he made me fell so good oops should i have stopped him. i woke up to the sound of window opening. when i opened my eyes i saw Shawn leaning against my closed window from inside. "baby?" shh" your moms still up. i scooted over and patted the bed next to me. he walked over real slow while taking of his shirt. he sat down next to me. i leaned my head against his chest and closed my eyes. "baby" ad your note and of course i want to be your girlfriend." " sweet then i'm am glad i came" i looked up at him. he sat me in front of him and puled my hands above my head and pushed me down and started kissing me. as Shawn had gotten all of the button undone my step father walked in.." oh i'm so telling your mother" i jumped off the bed and rain into the hallway with and unbutton shirt and underwear. i followed my dad down the stairs and Shawn came after me. " Lori my dad said. my mother turned around and dropped the dish in her hand when she saw us. Shawn was holding his shirt. i saw the anger build up inside her. she walked over to me and grab me by the hair and threw me on the couch. she looked at Shawn and said you better sit down right now before i do the same to you. Shawn quickly walked over to the couch and sat down. whats your name." um-mm my name is Shawn". " dose your mother know your out sneaking into other peoples houses? no mam " i don't have a mother and my fathers to drunk to care because of my mothers death". well your still in big trouble and as for you Missy. am i going to have to to give you the room in the basement with no windows. no mom. really cause this tells me i do. i sorry mommy.. don't play that with me you know that only works on your dad! ugh. she made us sit there four an hour. when she finally calmed down. she told both of us to get out of her sight. Shawn stared up the stairs and as soon as he dissaperd she stopped me. "jade here next time just talk to me about this" i took what was in her hand and said OK. i walked up the stairs and pushed open the door. Shawn was sitting on my bed almost looking mad. i walked over to him and sat down next to him." are you OK?" i have to go! he got up really fast and put on his shirt then he opened the window and dissapered. i ran to the window him drive off in his car.