Yay or nay?

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I'm working on a project for college about experimental photography. I'm a huge critic of myself and need someone elses opinion about this certain piece.
Do you like it? Should I change anything? If so, what should I change? Thanks in advance :)

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I think it would look better if you cleared up her eye a bit.

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I'm not liking how blunt the blend is. Soften up the symmetry a bit so it flows together more fluidly. I also agree with the eye area not having such a harsh superimposition so I would also Soften that up to just better the composition as a whole. Tweak the exposure slightly after doing so and I feel you will feel you have a more satisfying piece. I am and always will be my own worst critic. It comes with an artist territory. Stepping away from my images for the day and proceeding my edits after a break always helps me tweak them to there finest. Best of luck love. Beautiful concept.

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Could you add gold highlights surrounding your face to illuminate your aura shining through your beauty.

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I think maybe make the fade from black to her face more gradual

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I love it! The only criticism I would have is to remove the flowers over the lighted part of the face because it can be distracting from the beauty of the woman's features

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So... does 'Yes' mean 'I like it' or 'There's something you should change'?

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