So, I'm going to be a freshman this year (in highschool), and I wanted to know if this looks okay for school, or just looks okay in general? I've been practicing doing this for a week or so now, and it's kinda hard, but I think I'm getting the hang of it. You have to click on the image to see it all the way, I think.

Ignore my dead-inside face please!

And does anyone have any tips, both for highschol and eyeliner? Both are pretty hard I'd say, so I appreciate any tips.