Critique Please!!!!

****TRIGGER WARNING****

I’ve recently rejoined wattpad (a website for writers to share stories or people who don’t like to write but like to read etc.) and started writing again. I posted a story today for the first time in like 6 years. It’s in the pictures below, I want input! I know my writing skills are rocky, so any any any advice would be great! There’s a trigger warning though because I was raped and this is my story.

So obviously I don’t want to change what happens in the story itself, but I would change the wording and some details if advised. But please don’t bash the events themselves. I don’t want to hear anything along the lines of “you were asking for it” or anything like that.