This is my first time writing I hope y'all in joy the story. Tell me what y'all think about the story

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You wake up in the morning and u are just in a large shirt and in your underwear u go over to your dresser and put on some shorts then you go downstairs and you see your mom sitting at the table and your step dad cooking breakfast you say good morning to your mom and your step dad and an hour later mom does too work and u are home alone with your step dad. U say I'm going to go get a shower and he says ok baby girl u are upstairs turning one the hot warm water about 20 minutes later u get out and put a towel on and u open the door head to your room once u got in to your room your step dad is in there and u said why are u in my room he just sits there on your bed u walk over to him and ask are u ok dad? He looks up at u and said yes baby girl I'm fine and u say ok then he pulls u towards him and he gently pushes u on the bed and u ask what are u doing? He said u wanna do something fun? U said yes.

Call me if you like it and you want me to write a part 2