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I'm only 13 but I want to be an author when I grow up. I usually mess around with teen romance, but recently I started working on a thriller sort of book. So here it is, please tell me you opinions.

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Silence. I awake in a strange bed, one that I cannot recall in my memories. One that forces me to believe the worst, I've been taken. Kidnapped. My memories are fuzzy, but still, I remember my name. Pearl Wright. A normal sixteen year old girl with two loving parents. The walls around me shake, and as soon as it began, it ended. I think I’m underground, there's no windows and a single door across the room. I stand up, but fall back down when the pain in my right leg makes an appearance. I bite my lip to stop from howling in a mix of fear and pain. I hear keys jingling and the doorknob starts to turn. I press my back against the wall wincing when cold metal meets my bare back. It's only then that I notice my ripped shirt. The strings that have been pulled from my skirt, and my shoes, one missing the heel. A man walks into the room. He looks around his mid thirties, maybe 6’4. The way he looks at me sends a shiver through my entire body. His smile is almost a smirk, his eyes are wide yet also squinted.

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