essay help

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Ive been out of high school for a few months and I feel like I haven’t wrote an essay in forever. I need to write one for college and as i’m writing it i feel like it’s just terrible. It’s for nursing and I really want to do well. I don’t have many friends that are great with essays to help. I know it’s kinda an odd request but I am looking for someone who could read my essay and tell me what I am doing wrong. I only have one paragraph done but so could either send you it when it’s finished or send it was a go. It would be nice to have someone who is familiar with APA but doesn’t need to be as i just would like some feedback. Thank you