Anxiety Essay Feedback

Maegan

Hey everyone! So I just had to write a compare and contrast essay for english about a time when you accepted your true identity to when you luved up to others' expectations. I chose to do it about my anxiety. I sent it to my sister and she said that it was amazing and make her tear up. I'm actually kinda liking it myself. I was wondering what you all think?

Thanks in advance for any feedback!