Brutal Honesty ๐Ÿ’œ

Hey ladies! Looking for some honest sisterly advice! First time posting here. I am feeling a little discouraged. Just want to know whether I should keep pursuing my dream to start up my own little business.. Is this peice good enough to "fight for my place" (so to speak) or blah this is hobby worthy only... Thoughts? Just incase I need to say it..this is not me trying to market my stuff. Thanks!

Rach