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Yes I wrote yet another poem. Is it any good?

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Its really good!

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Not my cup of tea. It's your poem though and I tend to like poems with more figurative language and imagery so prob have a bias. Keep writing though 😃. It's a great way to express your feelings and the only person you're really writing for is yourself. Is this one of your first poems or have you writing more and just not posted them? Anyways could I have feedback on my poem?

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Love is in the DNA of the tears that poured like waterfalls when you had to let your lover go, love is when you give someone a coat because everything else around them is freezing cold. Love is drawn into a kindergartener's artwork; all scribbles and scrabbles and scribe. There's so much more to love than asking "Will you be mine?". 
   February 14th comes  again in 2 weeks and I'm going to celebrate it with all the people I love and all the people who love me.

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Because love isn't just expensive chocolates from a high end store, love isn't just hand holding and hugs galore. Love isn't something that exists merely on Valentine's Day because love isn't something you always have to proclaim. 
    As much as you might want it to love doesn't come in a neat heart shaped box, tied with a pink loyalty ribbon, addressed right to you.

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Here's an unconventional Valentine's Day poem I wrote about being single and what love means to me. 
                   This Valentine's Day
February 14th will come again in 2 weeks and I'm as single as can be. But I'm not going to let a day composed of red roses, sweet couples, and cheesy cards to bring jealousy and tears. For I am tired of dreading this sweet as candy holiday to be near.
                  To be continued...

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