Story time

So I’ve written something kind of just for fun but I need some opinions. Nothing rude please. I put a lot of time and effort and want to improve it. Any advice or helpful opinions would be greatly appreciated.

(What I have written so far)

You can't go back; you're in too deep. Knowing that there is no one to support you; everyone is against you. The people you trust the most betrayed you, breaking you inside. No one will accept you. You'll always be known as one thing and nothing can change that.  You're a disgrace, a mistake. The humiliation and embarrassment everywhere you go will never stop. It's too much to bear. Running not just from everyone else but from yourself.

Doubting that you are not what everyone else say you to be because you start to believe it yourself. You start to embrace the darkness growing inside, not wanting it to stop. You feel nothing; you become nothing. It becomes a game to see who can outwit who. Until eventually, you become what they believe. You can't go back; you're in too deep.

This is when you accept the art of killing.