Getting Married Tomorrow. Vows good or no??

Today, I stand before you and give you my hand with all that I am and all I am yet to become. We've made it through many trials and tribulations and suffered a 6 month period of not seeing each other. The only contact we had was letters. This was the hardest thing I have ever done but it has been completely and totally worth it. Without you I am incomplete. So today, I make these vows to you because you are the only man I want to down my life with. I will be as true to the promises I am about to make as I possibly can. I will apologize ahead of time if I break any of them. So here goes nothing. I promise to be faithful, true and devoted to you. I promise to listen to the words you speak and even harder for the ones you don't. I promise to stand by your side and defend and support you. I promise to lift you up in happiness and to comfort your sorrows. I promise to be there when you are I'll and when you are full of life. I will be your companion, your friend and your guide. I will bring you the sunshine to brighten your days and try my best to comfort you fears and dry all of your tears. I promise to laugh with you, cry with you and love you for as long as my life will allow. I will do my best to keep my promises and to be true to the things I say. So as long as you'll have me, I'll stand by your side until the day death takes us from one another. I love you more than words could ever begin to explain and today I become your life long partner. So to keep these promises I give you this ring. It represents my never ending love for you. Today the two of us become one

This is my fiancé and I. I can't wait to be Mrs. Christopher Goetz. 

My ring