opinions on this i made please

im not sure if it looks crappy. the butterflies are cut out from fabric i used to make cot bedding so will tie in with that but not making cot up yet as got 4 weeks minimum and i just freshly washed it n sealed it away. im thinking the writting looks bad but im no good at writting fancy or neat. had mixed opinions fella thinks its greats. i have only boys that hate gurly stuff....the white shading around a couple of letters will wipe off its chalk my 1st try lol. thinking of doing another kinda follow on one below or above it but not sure yet. maybe her name if we ever decide on one lol.