Wierd question but I need some English help!?

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Okay so it's no surprise I'm awful at English I have been through college and passed just sometimes I need a little extra help lmao sounds wierd but if someone could proof read this bio that would be great and let me know if it makes sense  and if not what should I change?

Blessed wife & mommy to Ava Mae arriving In November. 💗

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It's not grammatically accurate.  Right now YOU the "blessed wife and mommy" are the subject and it sounds like you're arriving in November.  Is this a bio for you or the baby?  Either way it needs a bit of tweaking but I'm not sure what to recommend without the context.  (My mom is an English teacher so this kind of stuff was drilled into me since childhood!)  lmk what the bio is for and I can rearrange the wording.  Good for you caring enough to ask 👍

Wierd question but I need some English help!?

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