I'm about to give my boyfriend the "we need to take a break" text. What do you think?

I think you and I should take a break because I feel like you dont value me anymore. I need you to not freak out or break down and just be calm for a second and let me explain what I mean by a break. I think that in the long run this will help us be stronger. I feel like you've slipped back into a similar pattern to the one you were in before I met you. I haven't seen you in almost a month and at this point you dont even seem very bothered by that. If I was in your position I'd be working my tail off so I could come see you but you stay up until 2 am playing videogames and sleep in until 11 or later. I dont see anything driving you to work hard and provide for the family you said you wanted. I feel like you dont listen to me when I talk to you and then we argue about important information that I know I've told you but you don't remember. On the other hand you purposely leave me in the dark about important things and you've promised several times to stop doing that but you don't. I feel like you might not be in a place in your life where you are ready to commit to me and ammon and that's ok. I want to give you some time to figure out what you want and what's really important to you. Because right now I dont feel like that's me. I'm giving you time to think about it and show me that you want this. I feel like you've been taking me for granted and I believe my family is worth more than how you've treated us this past few months.

I guess I need to add that hes airforce and I cant just go and see him whenever I want. So thanks for all the comments telling me I'm wrong for doing this over the phone but if I had another option I would do it.