I have a poetry contest in September and I‘m not ready yet but I want some feedback.

Please be honest.

Summer

Summer tastes like fresh watermelons,

ice cream and bitter sweet lemons

It tastes like strawberry milkshake

And raspberry cheesecake

Summer smells like exotic beaches,

pinapples and georgian peaches

It smells like coconut milk,

sunscreen and silk

Summer feels like a teenage daydream,

french kisses and moonlight gleam

It feels like freedom and youth

and having sex in a telephone booth.