Help!!

So I’m applying to my school districts school? I’m not sure how to explain it but I have to explain why I am choosing the program that I am and I just need an opinion if you think it’s okay horrible etc.

(Btw I’m only in the 10th grade) this is what i wrote- the question is why did you choose that program?

I applied for this MDTC program because this program offers an abundance of knowledge about computers hands on and off. I was interested after doing research about the type of work that I will be performing and the fields you pursue with the knowledge that this program will teach me.