For my fiancé

So I made a post earlier about something I wanted to text my fiancé for a early Father’s Day .. but reading the comments I agreed it wasn’t enough about being a dad so I took it down and redone it. And instead of texting I’m gonna write it on 1 of the cards I got him for Father’s Day. How does this one sound . Sorry if it sounds jumbled , I’m not used to pouring my heart out , I just wanted him to feel special on Father’s Day . He’s been having a hard time lately