Does this sound weird/wrong? Last name storey

Question

Announcing on Christmas. My partners last name is storey and for christmas we give a box with blue en pink filling + pictures.
I wanted to put this picture on top so it still confuses her.
I did not want to put beginning instead of arriving cause I thought that sounds weird ( English is not my main language so I might make everything sound weird 😂 ) for a baby that is coming. 
What is your opinion about this spelling? What would you put?
Thanks

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I think “beginning” makes more sense than “arriving”. Chapters don’t arrive, they begin. I would also lose the parentheses. Just spell the last name correctly, and capitalize it, then the reference will make sense. It will still be a cute pun and the last name is showcased.

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I would maybe say something like 
“A new character is entering our storey!”
If you are keeping with that theme 
However you do it I’m sure everyone will be thrilled, congratulations!!

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I think “The beginning of a new Storey” sounds nice. And you have Chapter 1 at the top so no need for the chapter twice in my opinion. Super cute though!

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It doesn’t make sense unfortunately

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Beginning makes more sense than arriving. 
Congrats 💗

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Just spell the name storey without the () 
Chapters begin, the dont arrive

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I think that is really cute and sounds good!

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To me this doesn't really make sense

Does this sound weird/wrong? Last name storey

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