Tattoo opinion!

Thinking about getting this tattooed. Not sure where yet. Probably my shoulder. It was written by my dad, he died to cancer 4 years ago when I was 17. Gonna put "Pilar" (his name) more on the bottom and I want to make it look like it was written with a feather pen by actually putting a feather pen at the end of the "r" and the jar of ink on the side. We had a pen collection together so I thought that'd be kinda neat. Thoughts?