I need help...it's my MIL bday tomorrow..

I'm trying to make a message for her card and came up with this little cute but still mediocre poem, if you have suggestions of better rhymes please let me know

Once upon a time🌌

A little girl was born👶

She didn't bring a dime🤑

Wasn't her birthday suit enough?🧐

She's taken care of her family👨‍👩‍👧‍👦

Animals and friends🐩👍

We wonder if she knows🤔

When time comes🕐

We'll take care of her👌

This is my first time writing a poem in English ( is not my first language)