Can someone tweak this for me please?

Lisajane • Married to my absolute soul mate and best buddy we have a gorgeous little boy who is two in December ( it took us three years to conceive) and would love to be able to give him a little sibling
On think I see anything buy my partner believes he can, could someone kindly tweak it for me please I have no clue how xx

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