Can someone tweak this for me please?

Lisajane • Thu, Oct 16 2014 • Married to my absolute soul mate and best buddy we have a gorgeous little boy who is two in December ( it took us three years to conceive) and would love to be able to give him a little sibling

On think I see anything buy my partner believes he can, could someone kindly tweak it for me please I have no clue how xx