Help a girl out?

I’ve started writing a novel online, and I was hoping for some feedback. There’s only two chapters, but I wanna know what people think so far!

Serial Killers https://www.inkitt.com/stories/thriller/360537

Please comment and let me know what else I can do to improve ❤️

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